This was full of captivating images and ended with a lovely, uplifting message. Great work :)

*cosmo-queen*

That was a beautiful last line. Some minor instances without some periods but other then that-remarkable. Hmm...well I do see some cliche words here and there but I guess it fits. Though I knoew you can do better then "embrace" and "passion".

Awesome...w00t.

Keep writing.

-Seras Nova