Notice: I am clearing favorite authors because I have far too many to list, so I'm putting everyone on the list on Author Alert, then taking them off favorite authors. This does not mean I do not like you or your stories.

:) CD

YES!! *dances*

:D CD

Oh my. . .that was so beautiful; I think I'm going to cry. *:')=tears of joy* I don't think I've ever seen or read about such a beautiful wedding before! ! ! I love it! ! !

Mark: Please. . . let me die. . . too much. . . happiness. . .

Me: -_- Leave it to you to ruin a good moment.

Mark: I. . . hate. . . too. . . much . . . happiness. . .

Me: -_- Anyways, I loved this story so much. I'm glad to see things working out so well for the Huntress, but I'm sad that it's almost over. :(

Great chapter! I ADORED it. :) It's probably my favorite one yet. . .Please update soon! :)

~Servant of Kastor~

Aww. . . *DLS stops, but several voices are still heard*

Mark: *Covering his ears* MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT STOP! ! !

Me: >:D I'm not doing it; most of my characters are! Especially the girls. . .

Alicia: It's so cute!

Mark: AHH! ! ! *Screams in agony and hides*

Me: *:o + >:) = shocked but devious grin* I know how to torture Mark! *Records the voices*

*Five minutes later*

Mark: NO! ! ! *Is trying to get out of the straightjacket, or knock the headphones off*

Me: >:D

Most of my characters: *Pass out from lack of oxygen*

Me: Hehe! Anyways, go Jalen! *Cheers* Rosemarie deserved that! ! !

Well, I've G2G if I want to catch up with my e-mails before the day is over. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !

~Daughter of Light and Shadow~

ok, this is the obvious aww moment.

soo... AAWW-W-W-W-W!!

:D CD

well thbb *stickes tongue out and sticks thumbs in her ears, wiggling her fingers... all in all a very silly face*... on the Kali clan. I agree with Jalen.

:) CD

(Formerly "The Lost Fae") Hmph! If that's the way his grandmother was acting. . .SHE DIDN'T DESERVE TO BE IN THE SAME ROOM AS HIM! ! ! *Smacks the Grandmother* *Mutters to self* (Sorry; it's late at night over here. :P)

Aw, he kissed her! ^^ I hope they admit their feelings for each other soon! ^^

Aw, man! I've G2G. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !

~Daughter of Light and Shadow~

oh... so that's why Sepona was attacked in POF... family grudges. Stupid, stupid stupid... what a stupid way to waste one's time... plotting against family.

Cool chapter though, it's the tantamount to conflict between the many clans of Jalen's family-- Jalen, stuck in the middle, with his soon-to-be girlfriend...

I will stop now. I will NOT influence your story. *thinks* I mean, I will not influence your story any more than you want me to.

:) CD

Aw, Jalen and Chartruse/The Huntress are getting closer! ! ! ^^ C'mon, figure it out already! ! ! :P

Aw, man! I've G2G. Bed time. . .

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !

~The Lost Fae~

I liked it. *nods* That paragraph sounded much better when you describe the wings in terms of Jalen instead of sounding like a textbook. No offense.

I definitely like this chapter and this story.

:) CD

Eh, I think that it's fine. :) ONe chapter shouldn't affect the rating, unless it's REALLY bad. . .

Aw, Jalen/Chartruse is so cute! ! ! ^^ I can't WAIT to read more!

Aw, man! I've G2G. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !

~The Lost Fae~

o-O-o. now we know why there are problems. i see. I LIKE THIS STORY! I replied to your email.

:) CD

Aw. . .romance is the best part of any story! ^^ Unless it's something totally poorly written. . .

YAY! ! ! CHARTRUSE/THE HUNTRESS IS TOTALLY ACCEPTED NOW! ! ! :D :P She DESERVES to stay with the good Fairies! :P

So, are those fairies that attacked the Elder the same ones who later attack Hakkana? :o If they are. . .*Wishes that she had those fairies clones so she could give them slow and painful deaths* :P

Anyways, I have to go. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !

~The Lost Fae~

AWESOME chapter! ! ! *Two thumbs up* I'd give you more, but I've only got two. . .:P

Chartruse belongs with the Fairies instead of those jerks in her home town. . .*grumbles about making them regret it*

Anyways, I have to go. GREAT chapter, and please update A.S.A.P.!

~The Lost Fae~

Hello Tesh. Yes you may draw Zeda. your story is good btw.Here's my description of Zeda from my own mental picture.

Phys: tallish; ragged, short black hair; deep green-black eyes; lithe, muscular. high cheekbones, oval-rectangular face, high forehead.

Wears black shirt, black tightish pants. A black-leather-wrapped hilt can be seen over her shoulder. Stamped into the leather is the sign of her father, Luke Lukesson: a stylized L over crossed swords and a knotted rope. she wears black leather ankle boots, worn, and a short dagger is thrust into her belt. A half-healed scar stretches across the right side of her forehead.

Seeing as I draw in pencil only, Tesh, and I've seen your artwork, your picture is likely to be much better than mine.Hey, I just thought of something. If you do that picture, could send me a link to it, and I could put it on my FictionPress profile? Of course the credit would go to you.

:) CD