one word for this..brilliant

Hm. Interesting. Don;t know why, but I like it. It speaks to me...

Very true,well observed, great rythm. I like the ryhming, it's hard to get right but it works really well here. good job

I like this, it's really clever, especially :

And a kiss to the night bird

As it clings with the chains

I love that, thanks for sharing x

Very insightfull! I like it alot!

I really saw those words. So well written.

i like it.. teh beginning is cool and the two lines in the middle are awesome & so is the ending

Wow! That was excellent. Make sure you definatley keep writing. And thanks for R&R my poem!