This was recommended to me. I have to say this is one dark poem. But I like that. I'm weird, what can I say? haha, it's a long poem, which would normally make my attention stray, but you managed to keep me focused haha. I didn't skim or anything. woot.

And wow, you're only 13. Just a year younger than me. You write really well. It all flows. Love the poem ;

Interesting. Good description.

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