It gave me the image of a girl arguing with herself in front of the mirror. I defenitely agree with every word in this poem and you expressed the imperfections ofperfection really well. Greatness.

Aha! Very clever indeed, and very true. Good job. ~ PC

You have this way of writing that I truely envy. You can convay your point so clearly with such simple words strung together so elegantly.

I had to think about that to get the meaning. lol its good tho. keep writin!