Great you made me cry. but it was so awesome. It was beyond words. Kudos to you and your talent. See ya!

Gorgeous job. This is so sad... Almost made me cry... You're a really talented writer.

-M

Wow, I guess I'm one of the good girls, its so sad but true. People get so wrapped up in not being selfish they become everyone's doormat. Anyways, great poem, I really like using the italics, it really helps emphasize those lines.

This is such a bittersweet piece about the overlooked aspects of life- people masking their own pain, trying to make other people's lives happy, and how no one ever sees it. I was so in tune with this... It's very good.