Wow. I really like this. Just the style and the formatting... it brings out this scattered, confused feeling. It makes it feel really realistic. ^_^ Well done!

~Daphne~

P.S. Thanks so much for pointing out that error in my A/N. I have no idea why I put that... just one of those stupid errors I guess lol. But thank you! ^_^

This is frantic and desperate, I liked the pace a lot...

wow. I love the stlye you've established here. Nice work...