Makes appreciate good rhyming poetry, because that's what this is. It is precise, detailed, and structured all in one. Good work.

Wonderful sonnet, so intense in its emotions and, as always in your poetry, breathtakingly beautiful and creative imagery. Wonderful job.

It's so easy to get lost in this poem - the raw emotion and vivid imagery just grabs at you. Your diction, again, is brilliant and I really admire your use of words. I love, love, LOVE this poem. Amazing work!

This is so enchanting! Every word is filled with beauty. This is definately going on my favs.

(It is so bothersome that indentation isn't allowed. There are many of my recent poems which look better with it. I know what you're going through there.)

upon sky’s magic traces drawn i’ll fly,

cerulean mystery that still endures,

‘til no more love’s turquoise kisses make cry,

poor heart that so abused ill yet perdures,

romances and illusions that fast fell,

when pierced magic chromatic bubble love,

bursting apart with noises & no yell,

whilst white downed messenger of peace—a dove,

enchanted by Spring melodies aloft,

went round high clouds—flew time’s perdition,

as mind when reverie doth come does oft,

allowing naught,—even love’s sedition,

for in that shimmering bright delight—time,

i know there remains yet your love’s true prime.

nice job.. the images are pretty & the rhyming flows nicely

This was a beautiful peice. I could feel each emotion and forced myself not to start crying. This whole poem was heartfelt and honest. Filled with the beauty of the soul. ^-^ Well done!! XD

!~* Noelle *~!