o angstynes G'job annie! Keep up the good work! I really like the use of flashbacks. The beginning was a little confusing, with the is-he-thinking-in-present-tense-or-past-tense thing, but it worked. You might want to use italics, since it's a flashback tho. *huggle* can't wait 'till the next update! Don't forget to update TLODAE and MBG! ^_^~Pont