o i love it! lol although i said i hated it. it makes me think if "yesterdays" in a different point of view, lol. i really like it u had a great voice in it. i think i might put it under my favorites.

keep it up~Nicole~

Your poems really express a lot of truths about life! They're so beautiful and so true and so touching... and they really make you ponder about life!! I love them.

It confused me how you said today is a reality and then said it was a fantasy.

Overall it was good, I liked it. keep up the good work.

this is awesome stuff! i love how its depressed about the past and hopeful for the future at the same time. keep up the good work!

yes, i'm reviewing my own poem. i never done this b4. just wanted to say that i know 2 lines in here contradict (Life is a reality/Life is but a fantasy)but its part of the style. just..flow with it...k, that's all. Go read some more of my work. Plz. :)