O, an inspired story or song. I'm going to be asking if I can use some of that somewhere. Of course you'll get credit for it but that, I really liked that. That was so cool. That was beyond cool, that was hm...I dunno. Inspiring something evil lol.

Like it. It is unique and has a good meaning to it. Even though it is short you put a meaning across right away. GREAT JOB!