Awesome story. Your writing stlye is truly magnificent. Great twist at the end, i never would have expected that in a million years! Well done, keep it up!And thanks for the great reviews!

wuts a "four-pack-a-day voice"? lol. I just found it interesting. SCott and Mitch are both stubborn. The "work dialogue" like the Base 8 thing, was confusing, but maybe it's cz im a hard nut, lol. I got it though. Gr8 story.

love the dialogue, it brings the story more to life.