DId u give up? I really, REALLY like it. SO please, I kno it's been awhile, but I LOVe it!
Now I'm going to go cry in corner.
=^,~^=
~Kira-chan~

I really liked your story. The occasional swear words bug me, but maybe I'm just weird. Do you really need them?

yes! the last book... that's kinda sad... i kinda hate finishing things... it's like...dead... but i still have to read it so it's not 'dead' yet.. lol... yeah i'm weird... awesomely wicked, keep it up!

I NEED an update...i just read all the stories, i need to kno what happens, I hope sara really didnt die, i really hope he finds her!UPDATE plz...!

Didn't want to log in...

Are you finished with your play?! Update soon!

Hey~Oh, poor Ryan! Thanks for updating! Is Sara gone for good or is she still alive cause thats been bothering me for ages!!Rhia!

Man... I almost thought you died or something! Lol. Great to see that you are alive, and have updated. Keep up the great work! I have to say that I realy hate that Mallorie. I hope he TAKES HER DOWN! lol... ~The Earth Mystic

GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD! I LOVE HEARING ABOUT DAVID! Great job, try adding some commas!

Hey~Great chapter! Can't say much now cause I gotta do homework! Update soon!Rhia~

It is ok that this was a short chapter. You have been doing a great job, and you are due a short chapter by now! Lol... Keep up your super story writeing! ~The Earth Mystic

hehe. it was so dramatic that i was smiling and giggling the whole way through. haha

chiri

Hey~YAY! AN ARMY! Is sara still alive? if so, is she ever coming back? i miss sara! update soon!Rhia~

HOW COULD YOU? Sara's the good person, the hero of the story! You can't just kill her halfway! Please tell me you're just joking!

It is really good so far, but I am here to review and with my unaturally short attention span I will... what am I doing, oh yeah!

Try to go into your characters a little more. I still am not totally sure of Ryan's personality, even though I read the other stories.

Description is good, I like description.

Other than that...(short attention span takes over and she bounds off to go get some cookiedough)

*Mati*

heh, when i thought of the guy talking to Ryan in the cave, i imagined an ugly, old sort of hippie guy, but when i found out it was Sara's brother, haha, it changed from ugly hippy to some brown haired surfer guy. haha. ^^

chiri