I love it. Weird, but cool. Keep up the good work. :)

I like this one. It isn`t as creepy as u think. It`s really good. bye. Justin.

HAH! Read Katt's review! I told you she'd love it! And she's right, this poem is so amazing. It's so deep, and it still jarrs my mind...x__x; I cannot believe you actually had a dream about this. This is definitely going on my Favorites list though. No matter how scary you think it is...I think it's awesome!

...*falls over*

Oh. My. God. That was...gods. That was *wonderful.* I'm not sure if the person speaking was male or female, but that's kinda minor. Just...wow.

The emotion and the words and the description and the...*falls over again* I cannot express to you how I feel about this poem.

Can I put this on my website? ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^

OMG thAT was awesome and really made you feel like you were there. I really feel that the poem would touch home to a lot of people. I really enjoyed it.