Hmm...it's hard reviewing songs as I can't tell the tune. For example, my friend wrote a song called "Pain and Life", and I personally thought it was mediocore, but when I heard the tune, man, it ruled. Well, it seems pretty good, certainly not incredibly, but then again, would you think Someday (Nickelback) or Smells Like Teen Spirit (I don't need to tell you who wrote that) would sound good if you only read the lyrics? Exactly. So I think it's good, could be great if the tune was right. XD