Is this poem about someone committing suicide? I wasn't completely sure if the line about wanting to die was a metaphor for something else, because without the line about wanting to die the rest could be about lost love or something like that. Wonderful work.

*sniffs* Oh man this is so sad! It's really well written though. Really. This really got to

so sad but so true, the same thing is going on w/ one of my friends now, actually two of them and i don't know how the one will end ,one of them all ready did.

scarred heart

this is soo sad...i have tears in my eyes...but its good to know you worked it all out...i love it. lots of love AllyCred