Perfect structure. =nods= I like the idea and twist of the fawn- it's a wasteland, but not so barren that it can't support new life. Or that's my opinion, at least. And thanks for reviewing my poem. ^^

I like doing the clappy thing with it

Nice. I love the concept of a fawn playing. They're such dear creatures. And between the fact that it's an animal and the fact that it's young it doesn't recognize the comparatively bad location it's in. It's merely enjoying the accumulation of life's events free from concern or judgment... A beautiful concept beautifully written. Faithfully Your Reviewer, ~*Mettie*~

This is a wonderful little poem, I like the way it takes nature as a vehicle to express a spiritual message. The image of the fawn is lovely. Perfect haiku.

this is elegant. Lovely and so true. I love it!