I'm always interested by poems whose theme is beauty, I tend to find myself leaning towards it when I'm stuck for ideas. You seem to know what you're talking about, I like your style of writing and the emotional imagery. I think the title could be tweaked to maybe be a little more provocative, but that's just me.
"A mosaic of colours against the clouds." What a beautiful line that is. You're going on my favorite author's list and my author's alert! I truly enjoy hearing (reading, really) what you have to say (write). Your poetry is thought-provoking - something that is so rare in most modern poetry. Another excellent job. I look forward to reading more! ~*Mettie*~
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