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| xHannahx 2005-02-16 ch 1,  | abusequite. maybe not a bang. maybe more of a soft thump :P good write, tho after this weeks mountain experience, im not so sure about the falling part! nicely done, Han. |
| fren chi 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abusei really love the first two verses best. described really well, and the questions at the end add to the meaning of the poem because the answers are unclear. good work and i like the changing subjects of the recent stuff. |
| Tsin-Tsi 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abusehehe this is made so much better knowing what its about.. gotta love the phrase 'forbidden kiss'. good write my friend :) |