This was great. I liked this stroy a lot, and I don't think it needs a lot of revision. Only one thing I noticed: "...the last of it’s kind." "It's" should be "its." Other than that, I love this story. Great description, and good endign and beginning. All around, good job.

Ta!

-PTG

Really beautiful and descriptive, if you want to read more about the Green Man, here's two books I have read that have mentioned him: Faeries by Brian Froud and Good Faeries/Bad Faeries by the same author. Very Lovely story, keep up the good work!