| Reviews for My Locket |
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BigKidatHeart 10/19/05 . chapter 1My own ex gave me a whole bunch of stuffed animals and I felt proud to have them but after we broke up I couldn't bear to look at them so I gave them to goodwill. I want to thank you for reviewing "The Mask." Thankz again |
xoskittleness 6/6/05 . chapter 1omg.. this is perfect. my ex gave me a locket for christmas and i barely took it off. in fact i wore it until maybe two weeks after we broke up. at the moment i can't wear it because it is just as you discribed, a reminder that our love has ended... loved it, really really great. |
DementedOracle 3/15/05 . chapter 1This is very sad. I liked these two lines in particular:"To remind me that someone loved meThat someone was you"Changing the meaning of the complex wording "that someone" this way creates an awesome rhythm. |
Pill 2/25/05 . chapter 1i love this one! i can totally relate!thanks for sharing! |
Brooklynn Star 2/19/05 . chapter 1I liked this poem alot. probably because it reminds me of a neckalce i used to wear, and it was one my ex b/f gave me too. i totally understand this and it was cool reading it because it sounds like something i could write. |
mercury.love 2/18/05 . chapter 1thanks for reviewing my piece! i really like this one since i can relate. i had a necklace too... i've put it away though since i can't bear to look at it anymore. great writing! |
I Found Myself At 24 2/17/05 . chapter 1Aww, that's really sad. I liked the poem though - your emotions were really well portrayed in this. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with everything. *hugs* |
catseyeview 2/16/05 . chapter 1O' what I love about this is the complete understanding of a gift that can be jewel of jewels or the edge of a paper that can cut and pain you most. The duality of a gift is displayed well here and I hope to the person reads for you. We tend to really have one muse at heart. |