Effective, i like it and can relate. Good sequence of haikus.

the last one is so good... simple and says it all. The others are excellent as well.

Oh! This is my favorite one yet! So often I feel that way... that no one will remeber me. You are very good at appealing to other's emotions. I especially love the last stanza. Wonderful!

well, well, i really like this piece as well you're really good!