¿Doth Thou care,—what they think?

¿Format's right,—or mistake?

¿Read some rules,—what say they?

¿Do this now,—do that then?

Let your heart,—sing its song;

Without doubts,—without cares;

For your life,—no one else;

Can forgive,—or fulfill.

I really liked this...it was different...I really enjoyed the idea of "blanket of flame"...beautiful yet terrifying image...keep writing!