I loved this one.

this is nice. creates a beautiful image in mind, well at least in my head, lol! nice!

Oh, that was so sad! I can almost imagine you wandering all alone in the darkness, cold and hungry... :(

This is an excellent poem. I really enjoyed it. Oh and " Der Steppenwolf" is a great book. Keep writing :D

I'm reading too fast, but...I like this overmuch - from feelings of bypast days...L.E.

hey there, very good poem. i really liked it alot!

Good poem. I love it. :D

different...very nice.

Nicely done. A pleasure to read.

-Zodiac