So, poetry normally isn't my cup of tea but yours is good. I like your style alot.It's really different and that's what I live for. *nods head*

I have now read all your stories on this site. I think what the reader wants is to be able to see what you mean when you write. When you write only from your thoghts and dont let us, as readers into your world, it is hard to comment. Readers on this site maybe are hear to read for enjoyment. Your stories seem to be written for yourself, and they seem introspective. ( i think introspection is good) You want people to read them, but they can't understand something that comes completely from your mind (each of us has a completly different set of thoughts and experiences to work from, yours are only yours and it is no wonder that others who don't know you would not be able to understand a stream of consiousness strictly from your mind), don't be sad. I see now that you do write for you. I hope you can find peace with it all. If you want alot of reviews tho, you might write something with concrete characters in situations that you describe more fully and give a background. People feel the need to identify with characters, and not everyone has had the experences you write about currently. Hope you don't mind my two cents worth. I really was where you are at now.