This was good, although maybe you could change the no more to any more? I know that's probably the way you wanted it, but... I just have such a peeve for bad grammar. Sorry, but the rest of the poem really was great. I promise.

I like this, the comparisons are good and the way you set it out really helps it along. Well done, QueenVixta

I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. :)

nice :D love is all you need

Well, then you don't have to marry me. But at least let me buy you a drink

I love the layout here. Will you marry me?

Honnest confession of what a broken heart does... Do you need a box of hankies?