You're right, I like this version better. I love anti-valentine's day stuff... so true... no gives me valentines 'cept my mom and dad (which is twizzlers and mozzarella stick snack thing... very good!)... so i don't give a damn about v-day either... ok, more poems to review, ja! Luv ya lots!

I feel you have some powerful emotions and feelings behind you're poem, but I feel you sugarcoat these a bit, don't cover up the dark and deepressing with shiny plastic and **. I liked the ending and believe you should try to make every part of the poem as powerful as it. I'll never let you see me cry, you can honestly just feel you're anger and sadness jumping out and grabbing you from the words. However, Love is, weak and I dont need it, thats just to sugarcoated dont hold back.