I have so far enjoyed all of your poems and the short story and I am gonna have to add this one to the list.LolLuvs and hugs,serpentyna

aw you're so good! I really like this poem - and I thought about what you asked me in school, and I think that it's the story of creation and light, then tainted by sin.

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This is beautiful. I'm astounded at the talent you have for writing on a variety of topics! Being so well-rounded is a excellent characteristic of a born-writer. I love how so many emotions were portrayed and yet the singularity of it all was maintained. Very well done. Keep Writin'! ~*Mettie*~