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| addie pray 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. I can't find critism for this, but I'm off to read more and will try to ruin your ego in a very constructive way. |
| Choleric Mist 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseSorry, I got no critism on this poem, mainly because it's a Haiku and very small to rip apart for advice.Lovely poem though; I have nothing much else to say... |