 AboveTheSalt 2005-04-26 . chapter 1ah. love it. reminded me of the movie Riding in Cars with Boys for some reason. Great portrayl, love the scene changes, really brings the mood into focus. Wonderful, subtle descriptions & hints. |
 ShadowPharoh 2005-03-23 . chapter 1sweet poem.
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 Cyssel 2005-03-01 . chapter 1wonderful imagery! you never cease to amaze me with your poetry. excellent poem. |
 wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-16 . chapter 1I really loved this one, and the idea of it. Oranges? Very tasty. Good work. |
 underoath300 2005-02-14 . chapter 1your discription is wonderful, but i'm not feeling a plot., or theme for that matter. |
 Manuel Fajar 2005-02-14 . chapter 1intellect's the sweetest kiss,
that can be found on this earth,
inquisitive the mind looks,
to find ways to pleasure give,
takes fine courtesies to bring,
lover's lips true ecstasy. |
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