ah. love it. reminded me of the movie Riding in Cars with Boys for some reason. Great portrayl, love the scene changes, really brings the mood into focus. Wonderful, subtle descriptions & hints.

sweet poem.

SP

wonderful imagery! you never cease to amaze me with your poetry. excellent poem.

I really loved this one, and the idea of it. Oranges? Very tasty. Good work.

your discription is wonderful, but i'm not feeling a plot., or theme for that matter.

intellect's the sweetest kiss,

that can be found on this earth,

inquisitive the mind looks,

to find ways to pleasure give,

takes fine courtesies to bring,

lover's lips true ecstasy.