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| AboveTheSalt 2005-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseah. love it. reminded me of the movie Riding in Cars with Boys for some reason. Great portrayl, love the scene changes, really brings the mood into focus. Wonderful, subtle descriptions & hints. |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abusesweet poem. SP |
| Cyssel 2005-03-01 ch 1, | abusewonderful imagery! you never cease to amaze me with your poetry. excellent poem. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this one, and the idea of it. Oranges? Very tasty. Good work. |
| underoath300 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseyour discription is wonderful, but i'm not feeling a plot., or theme for that matter. |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseintellect's the sweetest kiss, that can be found on this earth, inquisitive the mind looks, to find ways to pleasure give, takes fine courtesies to bring, lover's lips true ecstasy. |