great peice, i very much relate to it, thank you for sharing

Ok, where to start?

How about... wow...

This is REAALY good. I had no idea you were this good. I mean when you told me you wrote poems i usumed you were good, you know, cuz you're Amanada... the great. hehe. but i never expected this. it's amazing. i love it.

I love how you started it and ended it, that was different. :d

more please