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| storywritergirl 2005-09-20 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was really touching. I've never lost anyone, but many of my friends have. This is really sad, and I'm sure even sadder for thoose who have lost someone close to them. Well done, wording was perfect and it was just really well written. nice work on a wonderful poem. Cheers, storywritergirl xoxo |
| TheBrokenWanderer 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abusethis poem hits a bit too close to home for me...but it's wonderful and beautiful anyway...great work... ~TheBrokenWanderer~ |
| Cooties 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, but sad! Great poem! |
| Miss Megan 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is really sad...i luv your wording, you really get your point across. |
| BlackSerenity 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, you captured that feeling pretty well. I liked the contrasting views you had going. I really liked the dying before dead part, I think that's unfortuneately very true for some people. The ending seems kind of cliched with the leaving a mark on the world. I still think it was great though. |