Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Call Me Someday

Blu Bird
2005-03-31
ch 1,
abusebeautiful...I love it...and I don't know how, but it fits the title, like your explaining it to the girl, and asking her to call you after you've explained...very good.
Ethereal Kisses
2005-03-02
ch 1,
abuseHi again, lol, it is wierd that both our latest posts have the exact number of words ... freaky ... lol.

This poem reminded me an awful lot like a song. Is that what it is? I like the multiple 'choruses' it made the repetition greater, and drove the point across. It's a great poem: I love the bit about screams and dreams, very very good. Awesome poem!

~ Ethereal Kisses ~
M L
2005-02-21
ch 1,
abuseYes, you do have a raincoat. ? I like it, does it have music?
Toast n Guitars
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, and the title does fit. Keep writing -Toast
Emmytastic gal
2005-02-16
ch 1,
abuseWOW. thats great... very expressive. I love the emotions that I can infer through your writing, its a rollercoaster. Can't wait for your next work of genius :P cya.write on...-Em
Joewhatever
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abuseYay...I liked it. Quite a lot. Nice work, mate.
Return to Top