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| Blu Bird 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abusebeautiful...I love it...and I don't know how, but it fits the title, like your explaining it to the girl, and asking her to call you after you've explained...very good. |
| Ethereal Kisses 2005-03-02 ch 1, | abuseHi again, lol, it is wierd that both our latest posts have the exact number of words ... freaky ... lol. This poem reminded me an awful lot like a song. Is that what it is? I like the multiple 'choruses' it made the repetition greater, and drove the point across. It's a great poem: I love the bit about screams and dreams, very very good. Awesome poem! ~ Ethereal Kisses ~ |
| M L 2005-02-21 ch 1, | abuseYes, you do have a raincoat. ? I like it, does it have music? |
| Toast n Guitars 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, and the title does fit. Keep writing -Toast |
| Emmytastic gal 2005-02-16 ch 1, | abuseWOW. thats great... very expressive. I love the emotions that I can infer through your writing, its a rollercoaster. Can't wait for your next work of genius :P cya.write on...-Em |
| Joewhatever 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseYay...I liked it. Quite a lot. Nice work, mate. |