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Prevaricate 2005-06-29 . chapter 1
bright red ribbonspulled to decapitatehandinhand in myvalentine land

Those lines make me smile (not a happy-joy-smile, mind you). Especially the last two. I like your style. The broken-but-flowing lines make it a fast read with a lot of impact.

Nice.

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