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Reviews For: Don't Leave Me
Eirien 2005-03-01 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful, so tender and vulnerable, honest and authentic. I love it perhaps also because I can identify with the speaker, I always fear to lose people and especially that one friend that is as close and important to me as the person you address here. Your imagery is great, especially "the jagged edges of my heart tore my insides tender". This is going on my favourites list. ;-)
Unimportant 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
*sigh* It wrenches my heart strings. Terribly touching--if that makes any sense. You appeal to the fearful insecure part of us all, for we all do have that little part. Wonderful.
zamthezombieman 2005-02-21 . chapter 1
Hm, pretty good.
obsidian katana 2005-02-15 . chapter 1
wonderful piece. heartfelt, full of emotion, well conveyed. i like this, and feel i can relate. i especially like the 6th stanza. great job. keep writing. ^_^
Ravager's Torn Wings 2005-02-15 . chapter 1
OMG...I so love this...You are so awesome!
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