oh, pretty. the emotion tingles. the first stanza is especially gorgeous, and i love the lack of quotations around the dialouge. makes everything so smooth and dream like. the cloud imagery was nice. the ending is beautiful, and i love it that the sky is not blue, but grey, because that small detail captures basically the entire idea of the poem for me. wonderful work.

WOW I love your poetry. Yes I'm in visual basic again but I can't help it.I know you'll read this at least because you always read your reviews. You don't always read your E-mail and I can't call you but at least I can leave you reviews. (I am thinking of you now and can only hope you are thinking of me)

Love, Chris

Wow I love what you write. I know it does not mean much coming from me because I am not a good writer but still I love it. I visit this site often like I am now during Visual Basic. Maybe I should be working,...Maybe I shouldn't be thinking of you,... I don't really like Maybe though he is stupid and needs to be shut up. "WOW" "I own your leg"

Poignant. Though I fail to realize what it has to do with oceans in general.-Cindy Moon *)

You know.

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