|Reviews for Lie|
| somefreakylooknchick 6/20/05 . chapter 1
whoa. You were obviously angry when you wrote this, which is good. I can't relate considering I'm a girl and I've never had a boyfriend, but I can't definatly feel the intensity of these words.
| method acting 5/22/05 . chapter 1
The ryming was cute, but you could have made this whole thing deeper. the emtions and imagry were true, but you could have taken this further. made it deeper. Not bad though.