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| ShadowPharoh 2005-06-23 ch 1,  | abusethe use of the parentheses really added to the flow of the poem. excellent job! SP |
| geegi 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abusethis is very interesting, and at times it was a bit confusing to read. im not sure if thats how it was suppose to be, but it was still wonderful you have a true gift and al you need to do is let it shine through through ur writing.please read my short story at w.fictionpress.com/~geegi and my lord of the rings novel at w.fanfiction.com/~geegi thank yougeegi |
| darkmistresslae 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abusenice poem... well written |
| MaskedMarionette 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abuseer... that was kinda confusing the first time I read it, but then I read it again and I think I got it. nice job! |
| Tell me its not true 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseIt's different unique, like it. |
| Eirien 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseQuite interesting, I like the contrasts presented in this and the way you play with the notions of seeing/ not seeing or not wanting to see, opening/ closing, shutting in/ shutting out etc. |
| Freddie of Albion 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThis again, like the other is a very emotionally strong piece of work. It's interesting and very farmiliar in some way I can't describe. |