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Reviews For: I´m Sorry

ShadowPharoh
2005-06-23
ch 1,
abusethe use of the parentheses really added to the flow of the poem. excellent job!

SP
geegi
2005-06-22
ch 1,
abusethis is very interesting, and at times it was a bit confusing to read. im not sure if thats how it was suppose to be, but it was still wonderful

you have a true gift and al you need to do is let it shine through through ur writing.please read my short story at w.fictionpress.com/~geegi and my lord of the rings novel at w.fanfiction.com/~geegi

thank yougeegi
darkmistresslae
2005-04-12
ch 1,
abusenice poem... well written
MaskedMarionette
2005-04-11
ch 1,
abuseer... that was kinda confusing the first time I read it, but then I read it again and I think I got it. nice job!
Tell me its not true
2005-04-10
ch 1,
abuseIt's different unique, like it.
Eirien
2005-04-10
ch 1,
abuseQuite interesting, I like the contrasts presented in this and the way you play with the notions of seeing/ not seeing or not wanting to see, opening/ closing, shutting in/ shutting out etc.
Freddie of Albion
2005-02-15
ch 1,
abuseThis again, like the other is a very emotionally strong piece of work. It's interesting and very farmiliar in some way I can't describe.
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