|Reviews for I´m Sorry|
| ShadowPharoh 6/23/05 . chapter 1
the use of the parentheses really added to the flow of the poem. excellent job!
| geegi 6/22/05 . chapter 1
this is very interesting, and at times it was a bit confusing to read. im not sure if thats how it was suppose to be, but it was still wonderful
you have a true gift and al you need to do is let it shine through through ur read my short story at geegi and my lord of the rings novel at geegi
| darkmistresslae 4/12/05 . chapter 1
nice poem... well written
| MaskedMarionette 4/11/05 . chapter 1
er... that was kinda confusing the first time I read it, but then I read it again and I think I got it. nice job!
| Tell me its not true 4/10/05 . chapter 1
It's different unique, like it.
| Eirien 4/10/05 . chapter 1
Quite interesting, I like the contrasts presented in this and the way you play with the notions of seeing/ not seeing or not wanting to see, opening/ closing, shutting in/ shutting out etc.
| Freddie of Albion 2/15/05 . chapter 1
This again, like the other is a very emotionally strong piece of work. It's interesting and very farmiliar in some way I can't describe.