good poem! nearly everyone who's reviewed you has said about spelling. and there were a few cock ups, but i like the line "my bodylulledby your warmth" i don't know if this was a mistake or intensional but i like it because it makes it all one word "bodylulledby" it makes the situation more real. so if it was a mistake, it was a good one, but if it wasn't a mistake, then great line!

Lovely poem. I liked the pace of this piece. Lovely lovely!

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POWERFUL!I LOVE it!

eek, what a scary vision, but i think this poem captured all the feelings in it, very well done, a couple typos but bravo x weasel within x

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...NICE!

Not bad...but please check your spelling. Overall, I liked the first half, so to speak, better than the second. I just thought the language was better and more sophisticated.