Reminds me of something of Linkin park. :D Hehe. :D Nice, can feel underlying emotion throughout. :D

Yes I know this feeling..I hate it when people don't leave the problem alone and worry about their own battles to always want to be the enemy in your yet they say I'm your friend, you can count on sometimes people just dont listen or job on this.

Eep! I'd hate to be on the recieving end of this... 0.0

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I like this- but I think it could be improved if there were a definite rhythm to it. The poem itself is great, since almost everyone can relate to it.

Nice job, I'll read more of your stuff.

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lol hm, lol i lived this b4 hehehe :þ