|Reviews for Shattered Crystalline Path|
| Ahemait 2/28/05 . chapter 1
oh wow... that was really great. the imagery, idea nd depth was awesome. unbelievable job.
| Galadh Niniel 2/28/05 . chapter 1
Wow, powerful poem. The image of the path of glass shards is great, and you have expanded it very well. The repetitions of the word field "crystalline/ glass" and "blood" creates a very sad and dark, painful haunting atmosphere. I like the poem.
| Rosanna28 2/22/05 . chapter 1
I liked the lines:
Nothing ever follows on the lonely crystal path / Only an over darkened shadow and an endless trail of crimson blood / Forever flowing out of a body broken, a heart ripped apart / A soul left to die.
Spraying the darkened air with the shards as sharp as lovers lies.
Those were really beautiful. Well the whole poem was, but whatever! _