Ohh!THis is so pretty!Really touching with a heavy burden of !

...Wow...that's kinda of confusing... I liked it though!

wow. THis is so sad! So beautiful and so full of sorrow. I like how you varied between italics and regular print, it added feeling. Very nice!Hawke

so much emotion in this...i love the ending so great...i love it. lots of love AllyCred

A very elegant and graceful sadness. A piece with depth and scope and heart. Wonderful work.

Also, thank you very much for your review. It means a lot to me that you and Aisha enjoyed my piece "Distant Fellowship." I am glad that I could write that for you both. It truly pleases my soul. Keep writing. _

this was really, really awesome! I wish I had logged in, so I could add this to my faves! I'll do it though, im just lazy. gr8 one! very artistic, and paints a nice portray

wow, this was truly amazing! great job! i'm really impressed with work of art...it's so deep n lovely...

Hey babe!

I know the last review 'I' gave you wasn't the best. So I'm gonna give ya one to make up for it k?

I really love this babe. It's so hot man! :P

It's really really deep. Reminds me a lot of myself you know? I think it's really good. I think you're getting so good at poetry man!

I love you and I think you did an amazing job on this!

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting