Lucky girl. The poem seems a bit rushed and very very heartfelt. But that's what makes it what it is. Rushed and truthful. But you do have potential to write something deeper than the work I am seeing. I can tell, in some of your work it shows, work at that! I like this though. I hope that girl never lets you go.

Peaceman4ever... you really write some touching poems. The guy I have feelings for writes a lot like you do, so I can relate, if you will, to your poems. They're so sweet! I love them. Keep up the romantical work )

well I think I get the point. you love the gal. anyone could see that! Lucky girl to have someone think about them like this. I like how you repeat the first 3 words in every line.