Dear God. If I could love this anymore than I do, my heart would burst. Vivid and powerful and earth-shattering.

this is just beautiful. i don't know what to say, besides 'why the hell did it take me so long to review'.

your desciptions and word choices are stunning. that last line is perfect.

good. i got confused at a few parts, but i still enjoyed the writting. good job.

i love the english language. i really do. this poem was so beautiful in a subtle way- i loved the imagery and your choice of words.

i'm going to have to read some of your other things to see if they are as good...

Camille! Did I not review this and tell you how great it was and how you own me and I love you so infinitely much because you are a FANTASTIC WRITER that like, leaves me in the dust, dazed, in a blaze, my God. It's so sensual. I want to pant and huff. Wow. Really.

Gorgeous. Slides under your skin so deftly you don't even know it's stuck till it's over. Love all the sound devices.

Honestly, gorgeous.