Umm I know you wrote this when you were feeling sad... is this a true thing? Might be from what I've heard from you... is it?

~Meg

Wow...very moving and emotional piece...it's amazing how you can fit so much emotion into only *checks* 65 words...I especially loved the description "eyes glistening like flaring glass" great image...keep writing!

wow i like the dialogue. it brings alot to the feel... gosh *sniffle*

i especially liked the "eyes glistening like flaring glass" nice.

Please R&R me