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| EoSpHoRuS 2005-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseUmm I know you wrote this when you were feeling sad... is this a true thing? Might be from what I've heard from you... is it? ~Meg |
| o0oAnnie 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWow...very moving and emotional piece...it's amazing how you can fit so much emotion into only *checks* 65 words...I especially loved the description "eyes glistening like flaring glass" great image...keep writing! |
| Amadea 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abusewow i like the dialogue. it brings alot to the feel... gosh *sniffle* i especially liked the "eyes glistening like flaring glass" nice. Please R&R me |