hm... wow... you seem to like keeping things in mystery. ehehehe. ganbatte! just dropping by to say that i read your story and i'm waiting for more.

I like your story. Your writing style is very unique and easy to read. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it...interesting, but I think it's moving kind of slow, though I don't know where you're going. And all the things abot the eyes are confusing. But it's good. I will continue to read. ~Rvn

Oh so now we got to meet the guy...cool...the chapter are really short but I'm not complaining, short and sweet is better than long and drawn out...at the moment there isn't much character developement, all we really know is that both the guy and the girl are pretty ordinary...other than that we aren't shown much about their personalities or unique traits...still good chapter though..keep writing!

Cute first chapter...your dialogue is great, doesn't seem forced at all...oh and orange daisys are so pretty :) nice choice for a flower whoever sent it to her? oh...who DID set that flower on her pillow? Nice first chapter...keep writing!