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Reviews For: Later Days

Penn Annwyn 2005-08-31 ch 1,	abuseReflection. It's awesome. Your style is eccentric and lovely, keep it up.
charisma1525 2005-04-17 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this. The imagery in it was amazing...and it has this air of whispfulness (if that makes any sense). I could really picture everything that was happening in this. Great job with it!
not sure yet 2005-03-22 ch 1,	abuseits a good story, i enjoyed the concept, it needs some cleaning up though, there are some sentences where i was very confused as to what exactly you meant, such as He imagined look at himself again- the person he was a year ago...and then i thought, looking? maybe or, i dunno, im a bit stupid in filling in blanks in sentences sometimes, i know there were a few others similar and just as stupid typos, but anywayz, good imagery in this as well, with the blue sweater, i saw that and his pose too, it was interesting, excellent job