This is a great piece. PLease keep writing. Rain can be so healing... as long as you don't drown in it.

I couldn't help but smile when I was reading this. It sounds like a song that a guidance counseler would sing to a little 1st grader who was facing depression. It's funny, but well written. Good job!

Very depressive, nicely written. Rock on.

beautfiul...(i'm a bit biased...i love ANYTHING to do w/rain...) great repitition...

oh yeah, thanx much for reviewing my poem too! i like the way you say God will always be there for me, which i believe halfly since rite now, i'm so confused w/life, im not sure what i believe in...but thanx for suggesting anyways! i'll think about it, (im doing so rite now...)

hope to see more from you!

hellokittchic

that's really great. I'm sry peeps treat you like that. But you can't run forever...