very good honey, i liked this poem a great deal, nice duality to it (is that even a word?)

ps i was going to e-mail and say thanks for your reveiw of my stuff but you don't have your e-mail listed, but anyway

thanks alot

AH! you wrote the poem! and i didn't know! it's brilliant! you had to tell me! it's aight, i'm just giving u a hard time, i'm not mad or nothing. this was excellent (just like i told you it would be :)). great work my friend!

No, this poem is fine as is. Your writing is exceptional, dont fix something thats already grand.

nice metaphor

I like this the way it is: short and simple. I like the escape comparison also, sad though it is. The halves fit together and are good opposites. I don't know how it could be improved. Nice.

Please return R&R if possible. Thanks!