that was cute :3

Ah ha ha! Very intresting story, Kchan. Why did it take me so long to read this. o_o. Me don't know! XD

MN

I enjoyed this thoroughly, if it was a bit brief. Keep up the good work.~Speare

YAY!! Good shoujo-ai!! Finally!! ^_^ I liked it alot. The surprise ending was very awesome. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

*blinks* umm... no. I didn't expect that... >.> But it was a nice outcome! XD lol!!

Well... that was definately not an ending I would have expected... BUT I LOVED IT! awe it was so sweet! *steps on evil father for maybe have disowning his daughter* I squish you! O.o;; >.>; sorry I don't mean act so violently towards yoru charas... ^_^ Good story! I liked it very much!

lol... i love this. Now if only we could do cinderella like that...-Yin(please return the review!)

Hehe...sorry but its just a short story. ^^; thats it! Thanks for the review though!

please continue.